Maria Rita introduced me to de André's work with the kind gift of a 3 CD Box Set and the more I listen the more I'm convinced that his music is touched by genius. If he had written in English he would have had international success and been a household name all over the world. Just before I left Bristol for Nuoro I started to try to translate some of his songs into English which has proved to be a very useful exercise for the brain. Since I've arrived in Nuoro I've translated one of his most famous songs, 'Il Pescatore' , taking the total of songs translated so far to five.
These are my English lyrics to 'Il Pescatore' (The Old Fisherman):-
The Old Fisherman (Il Pescatore)
In the shade of the setting sun
there slept an old fisherman
with a lined and a wrinkled face
and a smile so full of grace.
And so a killer came to the shore
where a child's eyes were before
and two eyes so full of fear
is the story that we have here.
Then he asked the old man for bread
'I am hungry' is what he said
'and could you spare me a glass of wine
because a killer has little time.'
He woke up with hardly a sound
but he didn't look or turn around
just poured the wine and he broke the bread
so that a killer he could be fed.
And so, the warmth of a moment there
the killer walked towards the sun
and left behind an old fisherman.
He left behind an old fisherman
in whom remorse had just begun
the regrets he could not discard
in the shadow of an old backyard.
And so the police soon came to town
and then the army they came around
wondering if an old man knew
if an assassin had passed through.
But in the shade of the setting sun
there slept an old fisherman
with a lined and a wrinkled face
and a smile so full of grace.
English translation © Geoff Davis
Understanding written Italian, by and large, is a lot easier than understanding spoken Italian; perhaps song lyrics and poetry even more so. However, translating song lyrics, especially when my aim is to make the songs singable in English, is quite a challenge. One cannot be too literal, especially when the words have to fit the rhythm of the music, but it is important to try to remain as true to the original sense and spirit of the original Italian lyrics as is possible. My long term aim is to record a collection of Fabrizio de André's songs in English and hopefully make them available on a CD. For now it's very much a work in progress, but as someone who has been writing songs for many years, having sung in bands and put out 2 CDs of my own work, it's a project that I find very exciting. These are the English translations of the songs that I've worked on so far.
Here is a live version of Fabrizio de André performing 'Il Pescatore'
I'm so glad I found your blog. I was also given the 3-cd box set as a gift and I cannot believe he is not as well known around the world! Having said that, I did find at least 3 of his songs adapted in Greek, but none so far in English (I don't count Jack Thackray's 'Brother Gorilla', since it's translated from Brassen's original- Brassens, by the way, was a big influence on De Andre).
ReplyDeleteYour translation of 'Il Pescatore' is superb! Thanks so much and I can't wait to hear your recordings in the future! I hope you also do 'Il testamento di tito' and 'La guerra di Piero' (I think the latter is especially challenging).